Friday, 22 August 2025

Comic Script: Understanding Learning Disability Panel 1

 


Schoolyard scene. Dolly and Den are talking.

  • Den: “Hey, Dolly Daydream!”

  • Dolly (annoyed): “Den, you don’t know what it feels like to have a learning disability.”


Panel 2
Close-up on Dolly looking sad, Den looks confused.

  • Dolly: “No one is living in my world or speaking my language.”

  • Den (defensive): “That’s why your name is Dolly Daydream.”


Panel 3
Dolly points at Den, angry.

  • Dolly: “How dare you, Den!”

  • Den (guilty): “Sorry… but it’s true.”


Panel 4
Dolly stands strong, finger raised.

  • Dolly: “Don’t judge a book by its cover!”

  • Den (thinking): “Hmm… I’ll Google it.”


Panel 5
Den holding a phone, reading out loud.

  • Den (reading): “It says… Dolly Day Dream—no wait, sorry, just joking. It affects how the brain works.”


Panel 6
Dolly, arms crossed, correcting him.

  • Dolly: “Read it properly, Den. It says I have difficulties along the way.”


Panel 7
Den scratching his head, curious.

  • Den: “So… which is you, and which is your learning disability?”

  • Dolly (sighing): “Funny. You think I do everything on purpose, don’t you?”


Panel 8
Den, looking serious but a little embarrassed.

  • Den: “No, I don’t. I’m learning now. Just joking with you…”

  • Dolly (soft smile): “Having a learning disability is no joke. But sometimes… it can be.”

Visual Draft: Understanding Learning Disability

Panel 1 – Schoolyard Scene

  • Background: Playground or classroom doorway.

  • Dolly: A girl with a thoughtful expression, maybe holding a book.

  • Den: Smirking, teasing gesture.

  • Text: Den calls her “Dolly Day Dream.”


Panel 2 – Close-up (Emotions)

  • Background: Soft, blurred (focus on faces).

  • Dolly: Sad eyes, maybe hands held to chest.

  • Den: Looks puzzled, head tilted.

  • Mood: Dolly explaining isolation (“No one speaks my language”).


Panel 3 – Argument Moment

  • Background: Classroom wall, lockers, or playground fence.

  • Dolly: Pointing finger, angry face.

  • Den: Guilty expression, shrugging.


Panel 4 – Strong Statement

  • Background: Dolly framed bigger in the panel (to show strength).

  • Dolly: Standing tall, finger raised.

  • Den: Looking at phone curiously.


Panel 5 – Google Search

  • Background: Den holding up a phone screen.

  • Phone screen: Text bubble with “It affects how the brain works.”

  • Den: Half-smiling, making a bad joke (“Dolly Day Dream…”).


Panel 6 – Correction

  • Background: Classroom desk or park bench.

  • Dolly: Arms crossed, determined look.

  • Den: Looking embarrassed, scratching head.

  • Text: Dolly says, “Read it properly.”


Panel 7 – Honest Question

  • Background: Two sitting side by side (bench or steps).

  • Den: Curious but serious, leaning forward.

  • Dolly: Calm but tired expression, explaining.


Panel 8 – Resolution

  • Background: Sunset or softer tone (to show reflection).

  • Den: Smiling gently, showing he understands better.

  • Dolly: Smiling too, but with a thoughtful look.

  • Mood: Warm ending, balance of seriousness and lightness.


💡 Character style suggestion:

  • Keep Dolly’s design soft, thoughtful, maybe with wavy hair or something that shows individuality.

  • Den could be more cheeky-looking (messy hair, casual clothes).

  • Use speech bubbles for dialogue + thought bubbles for when they reflect (like Dolly’s “no one speaks my language”).


Would you like me to sketch a rough panel storyboard (stick-figure style but clear) so you have a visual guide before you draw your own version?


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